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The Imitator Knows Me Better

Chapter 20

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Chapter 20 of 20·5 min read·The same night, minutes after the eastern chamber

The Door That Remembered Water

Mercer pushed through the service door before the wet mark could dry.

The corridor beyond was narrower than the one they had left, its brick walls sweating in the dark. Rain ticked somewhere overhead. The sound traveled through the structure with an intimacy that made it difficult to tell whether it came from the roof, the river, or the pipes beneath her feet.

She raised her flashlight. A line of water crossed the concrete in broken footprints.

Not a trail made by someone running. The impressions were measured, almost careful. The left heel struck harder than the right. Whoever had made them was favoring one leg or carrying weight.

“Mara,” Vale said behind her.

Mercer glanced back. He had come through despite her not inviting him. Junie and the uniformed officer followed, Junie holding her recorder low against her chest. The chamber’s vapor had left all of them coughing, but Vale seemed to have forgotten the irritation in his lungs.

“You stay behind me,” Mercer said.

“I know where this goes.”

“That is not the same as knowing what is waiting.”

His eyes remained on the footprints. “She used to take this way when the river rose.”

Mercer turned back to the passage. “You never mentioned it.”

“I mentioned enough.”

“No. You mentioned what you could survive hearing aloud.”

He had no answer. That, more than the accusation, made Junie look up.

The passage sloped downward. Rusted conduit ran along the ceiling, bundled in places with old cloth. On the wall, someone had painted arrows in gray industrial enamel. Most pointed toward the dye works. One, almost hidden behind a flaking safety notice, pointed the other way.

OUTFALL 3.

The footprints continued beneath it.

Mercer touched the radio at her shoulder. “Hale, report. We’re taking the west service passage from the eastern gallery. Have units cover the river side and the outfall structures. No one enters alone.”

Static answered. Then the officer’s voice came faintly through the dead zones in the mill. “Copy. River side being checked.”

A speaker clicked overhead.

Everyone stopped.

“Mara,” Mercer said.

The reply came through a child’s voice.

“She is not there.”

Vale made a small movement, not quite a step. Junie lifted her recorder.

“Jonah,” Mercer said. “Where is she?”

The speaker hissed. “You have her marble.”

Mercer closed her fingers around the red glass in her pocket. “And you know that.”

“I know what she leaves.”

“Did she leave you in the dry room?”

There was a long silence. Somewhere behind the wall, a relay clicked twice.

Vale said, “Jonah, answer her.”

“You answered for twenty years.”

The voice was older than the boy’s recording, but it retained the same flat pressure, as if every word had been held in the mouth before being permitted out. Vale looked toward the speaker with the helpless concentration of a man trying to see through plaster.

Mercer moved on. “Did you leave Mara?”

The passage opened into a circular pump room. Three enormous pipes rose from the floor and disappeared through the ceiling. Their surfaces were filmed with moisture. A steel ladder led to a grated platform above, where a small emergency lamp burned behind a cage.

The footprints ended at the nearest pipe.

Not ended. Changed.

A wet handprint marked the metal at shoulder height. Beneath it, water had run down in five narrow lines. There was no further trail on the floor.

Mercer swept the beam across the room. A maintenance hatch stood open in the pipe’s base, wide enough for a person to crawl through. Its interior was dry.

Vale stared at it. “The outfall tunnel.”

“Where does it lead?”

“Under the river wall. To the old settling basin.”

“Can someone come out on the other side?”

“If the gate still works.”

“If?”

“It was sealed after the drowning.”

Mercer crouched beside the hatch. The metal rim bore a smear of dark red wax. Not blood. Candle wax, worked thin beneath a gloved thumb.

Junie saw it over her shoulder. “The fourth candle.”

“Not necessarily,” Mercer said.

Vale’s face had tightened. “Mara knew the old system.”

“She knew the route.”

“She was there before me.”

“And you still lit the first candle.”

The words entered the room and stayed there. Vale looked at the open hatch, as if it offered him a choice he had once refused and was being offered again.

Mercer reached inside and found a small brass tin wedged behind the pipe flange. It was the size of a cigarette case, blackened at the corners. On its lid, someone had scratched a single number: 4.

She opened it.

Inside lay a cassette tape sealed in a plastic sleeve, a folded municipal map, and a child’s red marble wrapped in gray wool.

Vale inhaled sharply.

Mercer did not look at him. “This one yours?”

“No.”

“Jonah’s?”

“No.”

The answer came too quickly. Then he corrected himself. “It was his. In 2004.”

Junie took one step nearer. “How many did he have?”

“One.”

Mercer held up the marble from her pocket. “Then either Jonah has been making copies for twenty years, or there is something you still haven’t told us.”

The speaker crackled.

“He gave me that one,” Jonah said.

The voice seemed to come from the pump room itself now, from inside the wet pipes and the rusted valves.

Mercer looked at the cassette. “When?”

“When he opened the door.”

Vale had gone very still.

“Your father opened the door,” Mercer said.

“No.”

The correction was immediate.

“Then who?”

The emergency lamp above them flickered. For one moment, the pump room was dark. In that darkness, Mercer heard water moving through the wall—not the distant drip of rain, but a slow, deliberate surge.

When the light returned, a fresh message had appeared on the pipe beside the handprint. It had not been there before.

SHE STAYED.

Below it, in smaller letters:

I LEFT.

Junie whispered, “He’s saying Mara stayed.”

Vale shook his head. “No. He’s saying—”

The pipe groaned. A valve somewhere beneath the floor opened, and brown water spilled through a drain grate. The pump room began to fill with the smell of the river.

Mercer put the cassette in an evidence bag and folded the map without opening it. “We’re leaving.”

“Mercer,” Vale said. “The tunnel may be flooding.”

“That is why we’re leaving.”

“She could still be in there.”

For the first time since the eastern chamber, his fear pointed outward. Not at the trap, or the police, or the record of what he had done. At the possibility that Mara had entered the tunnel and the mill had closed around her.

Mercer caught his arm as he turned toward the hatch.

“You don’t get to follow her into another room because you’re afraid of being too late.”

His gaze met hers. “I was already too late.”

“Yes.”

The word stopped him.

Behind them, the speaker clicked one final time.

Jonah said, “Ask her who lit the fourth.”

Then the old emergency lamp went out.

Mercer pulled Vale toward the corridor as water climbed over the drain. In her pocket, the red marble pressed against her palm. It was warm from her hand. The one in the tin was cold.

At the passage mouth, she looked back once.

The handprint on the pipe had begun to blur beneath the rising water, but the message remained visible above it.

SHE STAYED.

Mercer could not tell whether Jonah meant Mara, himself, or the person who had built the room and waited twenty years for someone to enter it.

Next

Mercer must open the cassette and map, determine whether Jonah’s message describes Mara’s escape or his own abandonment, and learn who actually activated the fourth-candle trap.

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