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The Imitator Knows Me Better

Chapter 9

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Chapter 9 of 9·5 min read·The same night, over roughly thirty minutes

The Hand Around the Door

Vale slid the bolt free.

The door opened onto darkness so complete that Mercer’s flashlight seemed to strike it and fall back. A narrow stair descended between brick walls. The air rising from below smelled of wet wool, dust, and the metallic sweetness of old wiring.

“Stay behind me,” Mercer said.

“You said that in the other room.”

“And you ignored me there too.”

Junie lifted her recorder. This time the red light was visible. “If we’re going down, I’d like the evidence to know where we went.”

Mercer glanced at it. “Keep it running.”

Vale went first.

The stairs had been built into the mill’s eastern wall, hidden between the concealed room and the upper gallery. He recognized the construction now: the narrow treads, the low ceiling, the vertical iron supports buried in plaster. He had passed within ten feet of this stairwell in 2004 and never seen it. Or had seen enough to decide not to look.

At the bottom stood another door.

This one was not concealed. It was painted the same gray as the mill’s machinery, and a brass plate beside it read CONTROL ROOM. The lettering had been worn smooth by hands.

Mercer touched the knob. “Locked?”

Vale shook his head. “No.”

“How do you know?”

“Because I remember it being open.”

He had not remembered the room itself. Only the door. The gloved hand around its edge. A sleeve dark with rain. The person standing in the gap while the fourth candle burned upstairs.

Mercer pushed the door inward.

A bank of dead monitors faced them. Beneath them sat a wooden desk, a reel-to-reel recorder, and three metal filing cabinets. The room had once controlled the mill’s security cameras. A tangle of cables ran upward through the ceiling, toward the gallery and the hidden room.

On the desk lay a cassette in a clear evidence bag.

The label read: E.R. / 12 OCT 04.

Vale stopped breathing.

“Elias Rusk,” Mercer said.

The name did not sound like an answer. It sounded like a door opening in another part of the building.

Junie moved around the desk. “Who is he?”

“Boiler attendant,” Mercer said. “Jonah’s father.”

“Was he here that night?”

Vale looked at the cassette. “He was supposed to be.”

Mercer’s eyes sharpened. “You told me you were alone.”

“I told you I conducted the experiment alone.”

“That distinction has become very expensive.”

She put on gloves and removed the cassette from its bag. The recorder accepted it with a soft mechanical click. For a moment, only static filled the control room. Then a man coughed.

Elias Rusk’s voice was rough and breathless, older than Vale had expected. He sounded as though he were speaking while carrying something heavy.

“Entry recorded at twenty-three fourteen. Edgar Vale is in the east chamber. He has brought the lamps and the wax. He has not seen me.”

A second voice murmured in the background.

A child.

Vale closed his eyes.

“Jonah is where I told him to stay,” Elias continued. “Under the stair. He can hear the machinery. He can hear the man.”

Mercer looked at Vale.

The tape clicked and hissed.

“At twenty-three twenty-nine, Vale heard the upper footstep. He stopped. I thought he would leave.”

A pause.

“He did not leave.”

The words entered Vale with the calmness of a verdict. He saw himself again in the mill’s eastern chamber: the first candle between his hands, the sound above him, his head tilted toward it. He had not been brave. He had been curious about whether fear would improve the scene.

Elias spoke again. “He called to the boy.”

The child’s breathing quickened.

“Come closer if you want to see,” Vale heard himself say, distant and unmistakable.

Junie lowered the recorder she held in her hand. She had gone pale.

Elias continued. “The boy moved. I opened the service door so he could leave if he wanted. He did not leave.”

Mercer leaned toward the machine. “There.”

A new sound entered the recording: a hinge, then a soft scrape of leather against metal.

Vale recognized it.

The door.

The hidden room’s door, opening.

Elias breathed close to the microphone. “The boy is watching. Vale knows he is being watched. He continues.”

Vale’s fingers curled against his palm.

On the tape, Elias said, “I should take him out.”

The child spoke then. The voice was small but steady.

“He told me to watch.”

Elias did not answer.

The tape ran for several seconds. In the background, the mill groaned. Then Elias said, “I will leave the door unlatched.”

A click.

“I am going to the boiler room. If the man comes after us, we take the upper way.”

The recording ended.

No one moved.

“He opened it,” Mercer said. “Your second person was Elias Rusk.”

Vale stared at the machine. “He knew.”

“He knew his son was there.”

“He knew what I was doing.”

Mercer turned toward him. “And he left the boy.”

Vale heard the sentence he had spent twenty years avoiding. It was not the simple comfort of shared guilt. Elias had opened the door and walked away. Vale had remained and performed. Jonah had watched. Three decisions, each making the next one possible.

The ceiling speaker crackled.

Jonah said, “My father opened the door.”

Mercer drew her gun. “Where are you?”

“Not where you are looking.”

“You sent us here.”

“I sent Edgar.”

Vale looked at the dead monitors. One of them flickered.

A picture appeared in green-gray static: the eastern chamber, seen from above. Four candles stood on the floor. Three had burned down to blackened stubs. The fourth was unlit. Beside it lay a police badge.

Mercer stepped closer to the screen.

Her own badge.

“Jonah,” she said, “if that’s a threat, make it clear.”

“It is a courtesy. Tomorrow is not the fourth candle.”

The image changed. A second camera angle showed the control room door behind them.

On the monitor, a figure stood in the corridor.

A dark coat. One gloved hand resting against the frame.

Vale turned.

The corridor was empty.

When he looked back, the figure on the screen had moved closer. The face remained outside the reach of the camera, but the hand lifted and pointed—not at Vale, not at Mercer, but at the cassette recorder.

Then the monitor went black.

Junie’s recorder clicked off.

She looked down at it. “I didn’t touch it.”

From somewhere above them came the sound of a door opening.

Mercer seized Vale’s sleeve. “We go up. Now.”

He did not resist. At the stairwell, he looked once more at Elias Rusk’s cassette.

“Take it,” he said.

Mercer put it in her evidence pouch.

“Why?”

“Because Jonah wants me to hear it.” Vale looked toward the stairs. “And because there is something Elias left out.”

They climbed quickly. At the top, the concealed room stood open. The brass stem still jammed the lock. The fourth candle remained on the table, but the carving beneath it had changed.

MERCER, TOMORROW

Someone had drawn a line through the word tomorrow.

Underneath, in fresh red ink, were four words.

YOU HAVE ALREADY ARRIVED.

Mercer read it without blinking. Then she removed her badge and set it beside the candle.

“If he wants a name,” she said, “he can have mine. But he doesn’t get to choose the room.”

Vale understood what she meant. She was not going to flee the date. She was going to turn the trap into an evidence site and make Jonah show his hand.

He looked at the black window, where the mill’s upper gallery waited beyond the painted glass.

Somewhere in that darkness, someone had watched him twenty years ago. Someone had held the door. Someone had learned that the easiest way to control a guilty man was not to accuse him, but to reproduce the moment he had tried to forget.

Vale picked up the fourth candle.

“Then we find the room he has prepared for you,” he said.

Mercer took it from his hands. “No. We find the person who prepared it.”

Above them, in the gallery, a child began to count.

One.

Two.

Three.

Mercer will use herself as controlled bait, but first she and Vale must locate the room Jonah has prepared before the countdown reaches four.

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