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The Imitator Knows Me Better

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Chapter 16 of 16·5 min read·That same evening

The Woman in the Upper Way

The archive did not let them take the box downstairs.

Saira Bell locked the reading room with the evidence inside, then stood with her back against the door while Mercer called the duty solicitor and requested that Vale be brought up from the lobby. Rain dragged itself down the tall windows. Beyond the glass, the city had become a smear of lamps and wet stone.

Junie watched Mercer slide the police supplement into its sleeve.

“You’re going to ask him here?” she said.

“I’m going to ask him what he knew before he wrote the card.”

“And if he refuses?”

“Then his refusal becomes part of the record.”

Junie looked toward the door. “He’s been waiting twenty years to refuse.”

The officers brought Edgar Vale in ten minutes later. He had not been handcuffed in the lobby, but one officer held his elbow as if the distinction mattered. His raincoat was folded over one arm. His hair, silver at the temples, was damp and flattened on one side. He looked first at Mercer, then at the box, and finally at the place on the table where the index card had been photographed.

He did not ask whether she had found it.

“You put her name there,” Mercer said.

Vale lowered himself into the chair. “I put a name there.”

“Mara Venn.”

His eyes moved to the archive camera above them. “You’ve read the card.”

“I’ve read the police supplement. Jonah named her. He said she was alive when he was found.”

Something tightened in Vale’s face. It was not surprise. It was the pain of hearing a private sentence spoken aloud by a stranger.

Junie stood near the shelves, phone in her hand but not recording. Mercer had made her leave it on the table. Saira remained by the door.

“Jonah called her his mother,” Mercer said. “Is that true?”

Vale’s gaze settled on the rain-black window. “I don’t know.”

“You knew she was in the mill.”

“Yes.”

“You heard her name before you lit the first candle.”

“Yes.”

“You knew she had a child there.”

Vale said nothing.

Mercer placed the photocopy of the payroll sheet beside the police supplement. “Did you know Mara Venn was Jonah’s mother?”

“I knew a woman called Mara had a boy.”

“That isn’t what I asked.”

He pressed his fingertips together. His hands had the fine tremor of age, though his voice remained controlled. “Elias mentioned her once. In passing. He said she cleaned the east galleries and sometimes brought the boy when she had nowhere to leave him.”

“Before October seventeenth?”

“Yes.”

“And you still went into the mill to conduct your experiment.”

He looked at her then. “I went there to work.”

“You invited an eleven-year-old to watch you restrain a body.”

“Not a body.”

Junie’s expression changed. Vale saw it and stopped.

Mercer did not. “What was Mara doing in the mill that night?”

“She came for Jonah.”

The answer landed without drama. That was what made it worse.

Vale continued, “I heard someone in the eastern passage. A woman’s voice. She said my name. Not loudly. As if she didn’t want Elias to hear her.”

“What did she say?”

“I don’t remember.”

“You wrote that you heard her name.”

“I heard Elias say it. Or I heard the boy say it. Memory is not a transcript.”

“You made a transcript of the candle sequence.”

“Of the experiment.”

“Not of the woman who came to stop you.”

His mouth tightened. “She did not come to stop me.”

“Then what did she come to do?”

Vale looked at the table. The archive card was not there, but he seemed to see its pale rectangle beneath the fluorescent light.

“She wanted Jonah to leave through the upper way,” he said. “He had been hiding near the stairs. She knew the routes through the gallery better than anyone. Elias knew the lower rooms. Mara knew how to cross the mill without being seen.”

“By whom?”

“By the owners. By the police. By men who came to strip the machinery.”

“By you?”

“No.”

It was the first answer he gave without defending himself.

Mercer leaned closer. “Why didn’t you tell anyone she was there?”

Vale’s eyes remained on the paper. “Because I had already told the police there was no one else.”

“That was after the experiment.”

“It was the beginning of the lie.”

Junie made a small sound behind him. Vale ignored it.

He said, “Mara reached the upper gallery before I lit the first candle. I heard her call my name. Then she spoke to Jonah. He wouldn’t come. I had told him to stay and watch.”

Mercer let the silence hold.

“You knew he was there,” she said.

“Yes.”

“You knew his mother was trying to get him out.”

“Yes.”

“And you lit the candle.”

Vale nodded once.

Outside, a bus passed through the rain, its windows filled with brief, pale faces.

“What happened to Mara afterward?” Mercer asked.

“I heard a door above me.”

“Which door?”

“The gallery access to the river stairs.”

“Then?”

“A splash.”

“Did you see her fall?”

“No.”

“Did you see her leave?”

“No.”

“Did you look?”

His answer took longer than the others.

“No.”

Mercer turned to the archive page. “Two days later, a woman named Mara Vennick was declared drowned. There was no mill flood. The death record is disputed. Did you report the sound?”

“No.”

“Did Elias?”

“I don’t know.”

“You knew enough to plant her name in the archive seven years ago.”

Vale flinched at the date. “I knew enough to be afraid that someone would ask me.”

“You planted the card under Rusk so it would be found beside the records Jonah had named.”

“Yes.”

“Why?”

“Because I could not say her name aloud.”

Mercer waited.

Vale’s composure finally gave way, not in a confession but in an alteration of posture. He seemed to shrink from the table, from the camera, from the version of himself that had survived by arranging words more carefully than facts.

“I thought she had drowned,” he said. “I thought Elias had done something. Or that she had gone into the river herself. I knew only that the next day no one came looking for her in the way a living woman’s family would look.”

“Jonah looked.”

“Jonah was eleven.”

“He remembered her.”

“Yes.”

“And you let him believe she was gone.”

Vale closed his eyes. “I let him believe whatever the adults around him required.”

The door behind Saira gave a soft mechanical click.

Everyone turned.

No one had touched it. The lock remained engaged.

From somewhere inside the wall came the faintest burst of static, then a voice carried through the archive’s old intercom system. The sound was distorted, but the words were clear.

“Ask him where she went after the splash.”

Junie’s phone lit on the table, though it had been switched off.

Vale opened his eyes.

Mercer crossed the room and lifted the receiver beneath the intercom panel. “Jonah.”

Only rain answered.

Then the line clicked dead.

Mercer returned to the table. Vale was staring at the police supplement. More precisely, at the word beneath the violent crossing-out: alive.

“You heard a splash,” Mercer said. “You did not see a body. You did not report it. And you still let the city record her death.”

Vale’s voice was almost inaudible. “I thought the record was kinder than the truth.”

“What truth?”

He looked toward the sealed archive box.

“That Mara Venn did not drown in the river,” he said. “She went back into the mill.”

Mercer must determine which hidden route Mara used after returning to Marrowick—and whether Jonah’s next message will reveal that she survived there.

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