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The Imitator Knows Me Better

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Chapter 4 of 4·3 min read·That same night

The Witness Above

At the fourth ring, Edgar Vale lifted the receiver and held it against his ear without speaking. There was no breathing on the line. Only the small electrical hush that made silence seem manufactured.

The photograph remained open on his phone. The coat hung from its nail in the passage, its pocket turned inside out like a mouth showing it had nothing left to say. Behind it, the flash had caught a mark on the brick: three pale strokes crossed by a fourth.

Vale knew the mark. He had made it twenty years ago with a piece of candle charcoal, a private notation to remind himself where the first flame should stand. He had not included it in the book. He had not included the coat, either.

His thumb moved over the screen. The photograph had been taken twelve minutes earlier.

He set the phone facedown. Then he turned it over again.

Across the city, Ione Mercer crouched in the service passage while rain whispered through the broken roof above her. The marble lay sealed in an evidence bag on the floor beside her boot. Beyond the place where she had found it, the passage narrowed and bent toward the eastern stairwell. A gap in the brick showed the underside of the old gallery.

“The passage runs behind the wall,” she said.

The technician angled his lamp through the gap. Its beam climbed past iron braces and vanished among the higher shadows. “Someone could have watched the mill floor from there.”

“Someone did.”

She reached into the gap and touched the brick. The mortar was dry except for one dark smear at shoulder height. Beneath it, caught on a splinter of iron, clung a strand of black wool and a single white cotton fiber. The wool was wet.

On the floor below, she saw a rectangle of clean dust. Something flat had rested there recently.

The missing object turned up three feet farther on, lodged beneath a broken brick.

It was a page torn from a manuscript. The paper had yellowed at the edges, but the handwriting was unmistakably Vale’s: narrow, impatient letters that leaned forward as if the words were trying to escape their author. Most of the page had been crossed through. One paragraph remained legible.

I heard the tread above me. I waited. When it came again, I lit the first candle.

Mercer read it twice. The second time, she noticed the red ink beneath the paragraph.

You did not wait alone.

Her phone vibrated before she could photograph the page. Vale’s name appeared on the screen.

“Where did you get that?” he asked.

“You know what I have.”

“What you have is a piece of paper someone put in a wall.”

“Your handwriting is on it.”

A pause. Rain struck the metal roof with a sudden hardening of force.

“Handwriting can be copied,” he said.

“So can a murder method.”

He looked across his study at the empty place where the manuscript had been. “Did you find a coat?”

“No.”

“Then you found less than you think.”

Mercer folded the page into a clear sleeve. “Did you continue after you heard the footsteps?”

The question entered him without resistance. He saw the upper gallery again: the pale space between columns, the suggestion of a shoulder, the darkness beneath it. He remembered lowering the match to the candlewick. He remembered the tiny blue flare taking hold.

He had waited then. Not for the figure to leave. For it to come closer.

“I don’t remember,” he said.

“That is not the same as no.”

“No,” Vale said. “It isn’t.”

After the call, he went to the manuscript. The red marble remained between the pages, its white twist clouded beneath the surface. He picked it up and turned it in the lamplight. The notch shaped like a fourth flame was not a cut at all. It was a fracture in the glass.

Or it had been made to look like one.

Junie Park sat in the back of a taxi three blocks from Vale’s house, listening to the caller’s recording through one earbud. She had received the photograph seven minutes after Vale did. The message beneath it contained no words, only a location pin for Marrowick and a second attachment.

She opened the attachment.

It showed Vale’s study from the doorway. The desk was in the foreground, the green pencil lying beside the proofs. The manuscript was open. The red marble sat on the page.

The photograph had been taken from inside the room.

Junie enlarged the image until the pixels broke apart. In the dark glass of the window behind the desk, a shape stood reflected: tall, indistinct, one hand raised near its face. Not a person at the doorway. Someone behind the photographer.

Her phone rang.

This time the caller did not disguise the breathing. It was close and patient, like someone waiting beside her in the taxi.

“Ask him,” the voice said, “who stopped breathing when he lit the first candle.”

The line went dead.

Junie looked toward the rain-blurred window. In the reflection, for one instant, a red point appeared beside her shoulder.

Then it was gone.

Junie must decide whether to tell Mercer that the Imitator may not be the only person who witnessed Vale’s first candle.

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